Thursday, January 28, 2010

WRITE ABOUT MYSELF

'Fiqah' is my nick name but, my full name is Shafiqah binti Sulaini.I was born on 23.4.1991 at Kg Surau Haji Daud,K.Terengganu.I have 7 siblings and i'm the fifth. My ambition is to be insurance officer.On my free time,i like to travelling and watching a television. I'm continue my study at Universiti Darul Iman,Malaysia..Terengganu.And now i'm at semester 2 in Diploma Insurances.
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  1. AzmeeRJanuary 31, 2010 at 5:29 PM

    My ambition is to be "an" insurance officer. I like to "go" trevelling and watching television (no need to put "a"). Use only one fullstop. After fullstop, we cannot use "and".

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  2. ZusJanuary 31, 2010 at 5:32 PM

    at second last line after word 'Malaysia'.U use two full stop.

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  3. afikaJanuary 31, 2010 at 5:51 PM

    check your grammar....

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  4. hafizudinFebruary 6, 2010 at 6:39 PM

    Your essay is good and so interesting..but your have a mistake in your essay..For example,my ambition is to be "an" insurance officer..Besides that,you look on your essay,I like to "go" travelling and watching television..(you no need to put a television)..So,i hope you can improve your english..Good luck..

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